Thursday 11 October 2012

Indiana Chip and Detective Teddy: Chapter Twenty-One

\ Chapter 21 \ Travelling



  Chip, Ted, Teddy, Foxy, Simba and Snaky, travelling through the forest, to the base were quite cheerful because the might actually get rid of the T-Rex, they had to go one mile, through forest, grass and rocks, Chip was leading because he was the one with the map, at one point they were attacked by and eagle but Chip soon sorted him out. Finally they reached the almost wrecked base!


END CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE

Notes: Yes, that's the entire 'chapter.'

Part of this shortness was due to boredom on the part of ten year-old me. He clearly felt he should point out the difficulties of getting to the T-Rex base, but having already done that (chapters 4-7) and being more excited about getting to the fight, "Travelling" was kept short. And to be fair, there's not much to describe when the base is only a mile away, whereas in chapter 4 just a small part of the journey was described as being "---------------------------------------" long (assuming "--------" is a mile). It's remarkable Chip had such difficulty finding it in the previous chapter.

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