Saturday 13 October 2012

Indiana Chip and Detective Teddy: Chapter Twenty-Nine

\ Chapter 29 \ Getting better



  The next day everyone was practising their skills, most were getting better, but some weren't, so they changed their skill.
  Chip was much better with the lightsabre, he was ready for the attack, he also had his dagger and his whip better skilled, so he was fully ready for the battle. Ted was better with his dagger and torch, but he quit the karate. Simba was good at whipping with his tail, but he had quit the biting. Foxy continued they biting and his whiping, so did snaky, as for I.Ted nobody knows what hes up to.


END CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE

Notes: Well this is just a repeat of chapter twenty-five. Ten year-old me is just phoning it in, here.

Another reason for such padding is because the book its being written in obviously has a certain number of pages. All that's needed to do now is get Chip and Ted to the conclusion, but if I did it too soon I would be stuck with a dozen or so pages left blank. In the end the story ended with just the one spare page, which I'm gonna say is pretty decent work.

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