Up, Up they went, through all the holes cracks, through the collapsing rocket.
Simba was higher than the others, propably because he could fly upwards better than Chip, but soon he made it, through the top of the rocket. Chip followed through then they went down to the ground.
They watched the rocket smash into the ground, then blow up.
"Noone could survive that!" said Ted Chip said "I know"
The fire died down, which had been caused by the explosion. "Let's go home." Said Simba "O.K" said Chip, and they flew off home.
From the pile of burnt metal, something moved, the metal started shacking, then out burst the T-Rex. "You will not get away, you stupid Chipmunk, you have not seen the last of the mighty T-Rex!"
END CHAPTER TWELVE
Notes: If anything I think ten year-old me's overuse of commas is getting worse...
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